05-22-2006, 07:42 PM
indeed, it could sound better with some meter and punctuation. that was always my problem when writing some new poems. but anyway i guess i cannot change myself (seriously). So i'm gonna show my newest poem anyway :roll:
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You left me once again
Gladly enough this time
You told me the reason
For you leaving me
You were needed on your world
To protect your hometown
Were you spent your childhood
And defend all the villagers
I was left behind once again
Worried sick about you
Like you cannot imagine
My heart was shaking in fear
Fear of hearing rumours again
Rumours about your death
So I made up my mind and
I didn
******************
You left me once again
Gladly enough this time
You told me the reason
For you leaving me
You were needed on your world
To protect your hometown
Were you spent your childhood
And defend all the villagers
I was left behind once again
Worried sick about you
Like you cannot imagine
My heart was shaking in fear
Fear of hearing rumours again
Rumours about your death
So I made up my mind and
I didn
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