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i still have just a few poems but i want to show them anyway. for now i'm gonna show one of them.


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An Angel and a Demon
On a endless fight
For the propose of freedom
With great might

Representing the good and evil
All over the entire Earth
To bring forth a retrieval
The good that is to rebirth

To end what is never to begin
The demon faces the light
To stop the good even from within
A never ending battle with great might

To never end, to never stop
So awful is their fate
Never affected by the aging clock
Never to be early and never to be late

Very Nice! I am a poet as well. If anyone cares to read my stuff it's here www.myspace.com/rorancrystalwolf it is under my blog near the top of the screen. I don't think it is really that good but some of my friends like it. Good Job Matt i enjoyed it alot!

Cool! I'm going to print it!

Thank you so much rorancrystalwolf and Gunter VanCrimson, i never thought that my poem was that good. but it's good to know that. soon i will show you another one. i hope to be as good as this one. :D

*smacks lips* yeah! I can't wait!

I can't wait either! The poem was awesome especially because it rhymed! Most of my poems are freeverse because I stink at rhyming =p

I'm a poet, bet you didn't know it. I can make a rhyme anytime . But seriously, nice poem.

awwww thank you so much Shadowknight, rorancrystalwolf and Gunter VanCrimson. i'm really so happy that you like my poem. so i'm going to show another one. :D

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Two angels fallen in love
It was a painful one
They were never together
Always in missions in the name of Heaven

Always miles apart from each other
But yet

Well I am not much for love and heaven but that was a really good one if I do say so myself . Although I would have to say I like the other one better ( no offence!)

of course it's no offense. i'm the writter of that poem and i don't like it myself. the first one is without any doubt much better then this one. so don't worry.