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review A Long Strange Trip(AU, OOC, ch1-2)
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ok, you dont have to post a link to both chapters of the same story on fanfiction.net. your story...makes more sense when you play that part of the songs you have listed. Lucemon seems, whats the word....hesitant around the humans, yet he opens up to them at the first question. so how is he supposed to be portrayed? closed off or open?
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RE: review A Long Strange Trip(AU, OOC, ch1-2) - by fred_18_2008 - 03-30-2010, 04:35 PM