01-07-2010, 06:06 AM
(This post was last modified: 05-24-2010, 12:52 AM by grandphoenix1.)
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5628813/1/Ge...Franscisco
Can someone review this story for me, please? And, when I mean that, I don't want people to have a bias with the story, just because of the content, I'm well fucking aware of the content, I don't need somone to reiterate facts, that I know. This site, has about 99.9% lemons, BDSM, shota/lolicon, incest, ....all kinds of X rated explict content that is more explict than this short story, so I don't have to be branded worse than a "lemon author", okay.
Can someone review this story for me, please? And, when I mean that, I don't want people to have a bias with the story, just because of the content, I'm well fucking aware of the content, I don't need somone to reiterate facts, that I know. This site, has about 99.9% lemons, BDSM, shota/lolicon, incest, ....all kinds of X rated explict content that is more explict than this short story, so I don't have to be branded worse than a "lemon author", okay.