http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5628813/1/Ge...Franscisco
Can someone review this story for me, please? And, when I mean that, I don't want people to have a bias with the story, just because of the content, I'm well fucking aware of the content, I don't need somone to reiterate facts, that I know. This site, has about 99.9% lemons, BDSM, shota/lolicon, incest, ....all kinds of X rated explict content that is more explict than this short story, so I don't have to be branded worse than a "lemon author", okay.
Excuse me, did you think my review was biased? I assure you, it had nothing to do with that; you simply made many mistakes.
(01-07-2010, 09:07 AM)AetherRose Wrote: [ -> ]Excuse me, did you think my review was biased? I assure you, it had nothing to do with that; you simply made many mistakes.
AetherRose. Nah, man, I wasn't directing this towards you. I know my story is not perfect, like a Stephen King novel, I know that. I just fucking pissed off that 4 people have sent me pms on ff.net calling me a fucking junkie, which just pissed me off.
Oh, I see. Very sorry for acting rashly then. Anyways, I certainly hope my post helped, even if only a little.
(01-07-2010, 10:02 AM)AetherRose Wrote: [ -> ]Oh, I see. Very sorry for acting rashly then. Anyways, I certainly hope my post helped, even if only a little.
I wasn't directing my comment to you, man. It's just some people over at fanfiction.net, had pissed me off by calling me a fucking junkie just because of this story. I mean, for crying out loud, ff.net has yaoi/yuri stories, lemons, and shit worse than
this.
Also, this site, has content that is even more explict than my story with a angelic kid doing smack. My stories are advant garde, a different approach to a fanfic, especially that it has Lucemon in OOC.
I would appreciate it, that if people here and also on ff.net, would give the respect that has given to all authors, I would appreciate it greatly. Now, if people would so kind and have a non-bias viewpoint on my works and review them, I would also greatly appreciate it, now.
Anyone care to review my story?