My First Writing Piece

[Gunter VanCrimson]

That was in season 5- right? Sorry- it *yells outside window* ISN'T OUT HERE YET- SO I CAN'T WATCH IT!!! *comes back in*

Lol- that is so cool! Lemon refference now! Thanks a lot!

[That One Internet Guy]

Maybe listening to Slipknot while I wrote it inlfuenced it a little bit

[DV85]

I CAN'T WATCH IT!!!

Dude, we've been through this before. Just look for direct downloads or torrents like on WtW or something if you want to see it.

[That One Internet Guy]

An itneretsing sduty at Cmbaridge Uinveristy sohws taht as lnog as the lsat and fisrt lteters in a wrod are crorect, the bairn wlil raed the wrod fnie, scine the bairn anlazyes all the lteters in the wrod, eevn if tehy anre't in the croecct odrer.

[Wisemon]

Slipknot, you say? That might explain why your story isn't as violent as you think it is. These are my two most violent stories:
http://digiartistsdomain.org/lemons/wise...semon3.htm
http://digiartistsdomain.org/lemons/wise...emon18.htm
The second one (the better one) is inspired by Metallica. See, you need complex and violent melodies, not just violent lyrics.

[senjuro]

[quote=Ghost_Op]With a sickening crack, the boy

[UnknownH]

An itneretsing sduty at Cmbaridge Uinveristy sohws taht as lnog as the lsat and fisrt lteters in a wrod are crorect, the bairn wlil raed the wrod fnie, scine the bairn anlazyes all the lteters in the wrod, eevn if tehy anre't in the croecct odrer.

Yes I've seen this before. It's true.

That was in season 5- right? Sorry- it *yells outside window* ISN'T OUT HERE YET- SO I CAN'T WATCH IT!!! *comes back in*

Didn't I say I have links to all 6 eps out now subbed?

[That One Internet Guy]

Slipknot, you say? That might explain why your story isn't as violent as you think it is. These are my two most violent stories:
http://digiartistsdomain.org/lemons/wise...semon3.htm
http://digiartistsdomain.org/lemons/wise...emon18.htm
The second one (the better one) is inspired by Metallica. See, you need complex and violent melodies, not just violent lyrics.

Too long for short-attention-spanned people like me.

[That One Internet Guy]

[quote=senjuro][quote=Ghost_Op]With a sickening crack, the boy

[Wisemon]

Too long for short-attention-spanned people like me.

That's fair enough. My point is that violence without sadism, without a touch of wrong where the right should be, isn't going to throw your inured audience.