Matt Ishida's poems

[DrunkenMunkee]

yay! Nice job ^^

[Gunter VanCrimson]

Mmmm.... I have you on YIM right?

[DrunkenMunkee]

me? 'cause this morning i got added to raymondvancrimson's buddly list, but i'm assuming yours is guntervancrimson. 0.o

[Yoosei]

that one is also good, but i wanted to ask what is that angel of light picture from, an anime or just some picture?

it just some picture... not sure if it's from an anime or not.

[Gunter VanCrimson]

That's me! Me and Blue used to share one email!

[Yoosei]

and here it comes my newest poem

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When life seemed unfair to you
I crossed your path on that night
You were scared when I looked at you
But yet you didn

[Gunter VanCrimson]

I'm saving this- It reminds me of that time when I- never mind-

[Wisemon]

This could be a decent poem if it had some meter and punctuation.

[Yoosei]

indeed, it could sound better with some meter and punctuation. that was always my problem when writing some new poems. but anyway i guess i cannot change myself (seriously). So i'm gonna show my newest poem anyway :roll:

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You left me once again
Gladly enough this time
You told me the reason
For you leaving me

You were needed on your world
To protect your hometown
Were you spent your childhood
And defend all the villagers

I was left behind once again
Worried sick about you
Like you cannot imagine
My heart was shaking in fear

Fear of hearing rumours again
Rumours about your death
So I made up my mind and
I didn

[Gunter VanCrimson]

The first half reminded of my past- I'm saving this one too! It's good!