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Matt Ishida's poems - Yoosei - 03-31-2006 i still have just a few poems but i want to show them anyway. for now i'm gonna show one of them. ************************************* An Angel and a Demon On a endless fight For the propose of freedom With great might Representing the good and evil All over the entire Earth To bring forth a retrieval The good that is to rebirth To end what is never to begin The demon faces the light To stop the good even from within A never ending battle with great might To never end, to never stop So awful is their fate Never affected by the aging clock Never to be early and never to be late - rorancrystalwolf - 03-31-2006 Very Nice! I am a poet as well. If anyone cares to read my stuff it's here www.myspace.com/rorancrystalwolf it is under my blog near the top of the screen. I don't think it is really that good but some of my friends like it. Good Job Matt i enjoyed it alot! - Gunter VanCrimson - 03-31-2006 Cool! I'm going to print it! - Yoosei - 03-31-2006 Thank you so much rorancrystalwolf and Gunter VanCrimson, i never thought that my poem was that good. but it's good to know that. soon i will show you another one. i hope to be as good as this one. :D - Gunter VanCrimson - 03-31-2006 *smacks lips* yeah! I can't wait! - rorancrystalwolf - 03-31-2006 I can't wait either! The poem was awesome especially because it rhymed! Most of my poems are freeverse because I stink at rhyming =p - Shadowknight - 03-31-2006 I'm a poet, bet you didn't know it. I can make a rhyme anytime . But seriously, nice poem. - Yoosei - 03-31-2006 awwww thank you so much Shadowknight, rorancrystalwolf and Gunter VanCrimson. i'm really so happy that you like my poem. so i'm going to show another one. :D ******************************** Two angels fallen in love It was a painful one They were never together Always in missions in the name of Heaven Always miles apart from each other But yet - rorancrystalwolf - 04-01-2006 Well I am not much for love and heaven but that was a really good one if I do say so myself . Although I would have to say I like the other one better ( no offence!) - Yoosei - 04-01-2006 of course it's no offense. i'm the writter of that poem and i don't like it myself. the first one is without any doubt much better then this one. so don't worry. |