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03-04-2007, 08:22 AM
Hey, Vicky finally appeared! Lolz.

I can only say that you made some slight spelling error's, and also some name errors. You even accidentally made a paragraph into italics inbetween the song Numb, I missed it around first time reading.

Here, another small mistake:

[quote=Story] Jake thought, and then he walked towards it,
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This is Life - by DragonMasterX - 03-03-2007, 03:07 PM
[No subject] - by Kurtz - 03-04-2007, 08:22 AM
[No subject] - by DragonMasterX - 03-04-2007, 10:04 AM
[No subject] - by Kurtz - 03-04-2007, 10:08 AM
[No subject] - by Erethzium - 03-04-2007, 10:09 AM
[No subject] - by Misty - 03-04-2007, 10:41 AM
[No subject] - by Guest - 03-05-2007, 05:12 AM
[No subject] - by DragonMasterX - 03-05-2007, 12:59 PM
[No subject] - by UnknownH - 03-06-2007, 02:45 AM
[No subject] - by DragonMasterX - 03-06-2007, 09:02 AM
[No subject] - by Wisemon - 03-06-2007, 10:36 AM
[No subject] - by DragonMasterX - 03-06-2007, 12:55 PM
[No subject] - by UnknownH - 03-07-2007, 02:58 AM
[No subject] - by DragonMasterX - 03-07-2007, 09:32 AM
[No subject] - by Wisemon - 03-07-2007, 11:57 AM
[No subject] - by DragonMasterX - 03-07-2007, 01:18 PM
[No subject] - by Erethzium - 03-07-2007, 01:20 PM
[No subject] - by UnknownH - 03-08-2007, 10:56 AM
[No subject] - by DragonMasterX - 03-08-2007, 11:05 AM
[No subject] - by Wisemon - 03-08-2007, 11:19 AM
[No subject] - by UnknownH - 03-08-2007, 11:24 AM
[No subject] - by DragonMasterX - 03-08-2007, 11:25 AM
[No subject] - by That One Internet Guy - 03-09-2007, 06:44 AM
[No subject] - by DragonMasterX - 03-09-2007, 01:47 PM