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This is Life - DragonMasterX - 03-03-2007
Here I am. A new fic I'll present to you.
This time, it's original, it's a real life based story, it was a struck of inspiration and I really hope you all like it. I hope to recieved constructive critic for this one.
Disclaimer: All of these things you are about to read are copyrighted to me, this is original work and may not be used without permission.
Prologue.
Hey, the name
- Kurtz - 03-04-2007
Hey, Vicky finally appeared! Lolz.
I can only say that you made some slight spelling error's, and also some name errors. You even accidentally made a paragraph into italics inbetween the song Numb, I missed it around first time reading.
Here, another small mistake:
[quote=Story] Jake thought, and then he walked towards it,
- DragonMasterX - 03-04-2007
Oh, the italic thing I won't bother with here. When I posted it, everything to with how I had written it became into the default font for the forum. It's really odd, but well, I hadn't become aware of the name mistake, whoops!
Where are the slight spelling errors? I'd like to correct them.
- Kurtz - 03-04-2007
I'll try and find them again. Lol.
- Erethzium - 03-04-2007
awesome!!
- Misty - 03-04-2007
Nice!! Me really liked it.
Two claws up!! ^_^
- Guest - 03-05-2007
Sure, a dragon in a Linkin Park cover band. Wouldn't a Gundam make more sense?
- DragonMasterX - 03-05-2007
Could you elaborate more? My sarcasm detector isn't working.
- UnknownH - 03-06-2007
He's talking about the cover of one of the albums and how there was a gundam in somewhere I belong.
- DragonMasterX - 03-06-2007
Oh! Never seen it! I'm a bad fan. Ehh, wait- I just download music- I'm not interested in buying CDs, at least not yet.