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Here I am. A new fic I'll present to you.
This time, it's original, it's a real life based story, it was a struck of inspiration and I really hope you all like it. I hope to recieved constructive critic for this one.

Disclaimer: All of these things you are about to read are copyrighted to me, this is original work and may not be used without permission.

Prologue.

Hey, the name

Hey, Vicky finally appeared! Lolz.

I can only say that you made some slight spelling error's, and also some name errors. You even accidentally made a paragraph into italics inbetween the song Numb, I missed it around first time reading.

Here, another small mistake:

[quote=Story] Jake thought, and then he walked towards it,

Oh, the italic thing I won't bother with here. When I posted it, everything to with how I had written it became into the default font for the forum. It's really odd, but well, I hadn't become aware of the name mistake, whoops!

Where are the slight spelling errors? I'd like to correct them.

I'll try and find them again. Lol.

awesome!!

Nice!! Me really liked it.

Two claws up!! ^_^

Sure, a dragon in a Linkin Park cover band. Wouldn't a Gundam make more sense?

Could you elaborate more? My sarcasm detector isn't working.

He's talking about the cover of one of the albums and how there was a gundam in somewhere I belong.

Oh! Never seen it! I'm a bad fan. Ehh, wait- I just download music- I'm not interested in buying CDs, at least not yet.