08-30-2006, 12:44 PM
I'm planning a soft BDSM lemon. Renamon (dom) and Rika (sub). Any suggestions?
Help! I'm stuck!
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08-30-2006, 12:44 PM
I'm planning a soft BDSM lemon. Renamon (dom) and Rika (sub). Any suggestions?
08-30-2006, 02:06 PM
Make sure that your story really gives the readers a good idea of why Ruki/Rika is being submissive, particularly to Renamon. Aside from that, I'd rather not comment at present. Maybe after a bit more time to think on it.
08-30-2006, 02:32 PM
Okay.
And on the why bit... It's simple really. Rika just says one insult too many. Combined with a slight other factor... Which anyone can probably guess.
09-01-2006, 02:33 PM
*nods* Done. But I need an idea with RENAMON being the dominant one... Not too sure...
09-05-2006, 12:23 PM
Rika makes a light-hearted insult towards Renamon, Renamon pushes her down light-heardedly on a couch or something similar and soft, but she feels aroused when this happens (because it was a dominant act).
And let it unravel from there.
09-21-2006, 04:29 AM
*Stares dreamily...*
Quote:I think I've seen a manga with some parts of this. I think I saw one panel of that, somewhere... Anyway, is this finished? ^.^ |
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