09-23-2008, 06:47 AM
Your gaomon looks off to me, even creepy. I think you're allotting too much "face space" (his bandana come just short of actually covering his eyes: the black top edge is actually under it). The eye shape also just doesn't fit. Gaomon is not drawn with the usual "anime human" eyes; even at their "neutral", they are inclined, and that "fierce" aspect is to me one of his most endearing characteristics.
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"If Jeri says you're cute, you're CUTE. " Renafan