04-11-2003, 02:33 AM
Is that Jeri talking to Ai?
If so... you didn't color her hair (she looks blonde), and her pigtail is on the wrong side (it's on HER left).
On another note, interesting usage of MarineAngemon. I would've never thought of using him/her/...it in anything. You are groundbreaking, my friend.
Oh, and El Intruder: Most Hentai Mangas DON'T have a plot (have you even READ most of the non-home-spun Mangas here? In Juke De Ketsucatchhin (Kari 02 in the DaD), Kari simply wants Izzy to screw her, so she seduces him by having him watch her piss, then stroking him, wondering why a guy's "piss" is white, since she usually plays with Tai, while hers is yellow. THEN Mimi comes into the picture, and is furious that Izzy is even LETTING Kari touch him, seeing as Izzy and Mimi are an item. ALL THREE of 'em are later seen in the Kamiya bathroom, all in the SAME bath. Mimi is still furious at Izzy, then Kari says something [I don't kow what, but by her expression, it must've been something cute and sunny, or reassuring that she would share Izzy with Mimi... I dunno]. Mimi attempts to hold Izzy's hand, accidently holding his thing. They end up having hot, bathtub sex. Kari, whose gotten out of the tub to wash her hair, is seeing this, and becomes mad that Izzy came in Mimi. She starts sucking out izzy's cum out of Mimi, and snowballs Mimi. They all end up having a kinky threesome... the end. Does THAT sound like plot to you? i don't think so.)
However, I feel there is some plot to Prophet's Manga, so NO WHINING!
If so... you didn't color her hair (she looks blonde), and her pigtail is on the wrong side (it's on HER left).
On another note, interesting usage of MarineAngemon. I would've never thought of using him/her/...it in anything. You are groundbreaking, my friend.
Oh, and El Intruder: Most Hentai Mangas DON'T have a plot (have you even READ most of the non-home-spun Mangas here? In Juke De Ketsucatchhin (Kari 02 in the DaD), Kari simply wants Izzy to screw her, so she seduces him by having him watch her piss, then stroking him, wondering why a guy's "piss" is white, since she usually plays with Tai, while hers is yellow. THEN Mimi comes into the picture, and is furious that Izzy is even LETTING Kari touch him, seeing as Izzy and Mimi are an item. ALL THREE of 'em are later seen in the Kamiya bathroom, all in the SAME bath. Mimi is still furious at Izzy, then Kari says something [I don't kow what, but by her expression, it must've been something cute and sunny, or reassuring that she would share Izzy with Mimi... I dunno]. Mimi attempts to hold Izzy's hand, accidently holding his thing. They end up having hot, bathtub sex. Kari, whose gotten out of the tub to wash her hair, is seeing this, and becomes mad that Izzy came in Mimi. She starts sucking out izzy's cum out of Mimi, and snowballs Mimi. They all end up having a kinky threesome... the end. Does THAT sound like plot to you? i don't think so.)
However, I feel there is some plot to Prophet's Manga, so NO WHINING!