Sagas of Elements?

[MISTER BIG T]

"isane" deals, maybe you wanted to say.

No, I wanted to say inane. It's a real english word.

Adjective: inane (inaner, inanest)

1. Complacently or inanely foolish


By the way, this isn't very gory story aside the baby part, in my opinnion. It's more of a build up and sets the mood. The next story is too, a mood setter. The third one is where the hell is truly unleashed for the first time.


I fixed the errors you pointed out and made some other minor alternations and reposted the story. It's more awesome. I'll send it with the other proof readed episodes to DAD soon. :D