07-20-2006, 10:27 AM
Quote:And let's not foget that you said you'd mailed yours in ages ago, Nate said resend it, and a few hours later it's in my inbox."Amazing!" Watson exclaimed.
Here's the revised section that you rightfully called self-insertion and out of character. It's still self-insertion. In fact, it's more self-insertion than before, but it's no longer out of character.
"I looked up and saw you;
I know that you saw me.
We froze but for a moment
In empathy."-Rise Against