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Wisemon wrote:
Quote:Your stream of consciousness poetry is impressive. Personally, I can't think fast enough to even use the style, so I don't. I could say that it could use some polish and focus, but that would defeat the point of the style.

Finally...thank you and I know that it would defeat the purpose of that style if you attempt to polish it and focus. I learned that skill from two teachers a marvelous professor in college and my brother and that poetry style is very hard not to want to stop and actually think but its" Pen to Paper" poetry....

What did you think about the others?......Cause I want the booklet of poetry to be good....
Gabumon Loverz
Shadow Dragon Pack (SDP)
Creative Minds
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Poem 1 - by blueeyedgabulvo0o - 06-06-2006, 03:38 PM
Poem 2 - by blueeyedgabulvo0o - 06-06-2006, 03:42 PM
Poem 3 - by blueeyedgabulvo0o - 06-06-2006, 03:44 PM
Poem 4 - by blueeyedgabulvo0o - 06-06-2006, 03:45 PM
[No subject] - by blueeyedgabulvo0o - 06-06-2006, 03:48 PM
Poem 6 - by blueeyedgabulvo0o - 06-06-2006, 03:50 PM
poem 7 - by blueeyedgabulvo0o - 06-06-2006, 03:51 PM
poem 8 - by blueeyedgabulvo0o - 06-06-2006, 03:53 PM
[No subject] - by blueeyedgabulvo0o - 06-06-2006, 03:55 PM
poem 11 - by blueeyedgabulvo0o - 06-06-2006, 03:58 PM
[No subject] - by blueeyedgabulvo0o - 06-06-2006, 04:03 PM
[No subject] - by Velmont VanCrimson - 06-06-2006, 07:23 PM
[No subject] - by Seit The Reaper - 06-06-2006, 09:29 PM
[No subject] - by DragonMasterX - 06-06-2006, 11:29 PM
[No subject] - by Blitz VanCrimson - 06-06-2006, 11:59 PM
[No subject] - by DragonMasterX - 06-07-2006, 01:19 AM
[No subject] - by DragonMasterX - 06-07-2006, 01:40 AM
[No subject] - by DarkBlue - 06-07-2006, 01:46 AM
[No subject] - by DragonMasterX - 06-07-2006, 02:11 AM
[No subject] - by Blitz VanCrimson - 06-07-2006, 02:30 AM
[No subject] - by DragonMasterX - 06-07-2006, 07:22 AM
[No subject] - by blueeyedgabulvo0o - 06-07-2006, 07:37 AM
[No subject] - by rorancrystalwolf - 06-07-2006, 11:52 AM
[No subject] - by blueeyedgabulvo0o - 06-07-2006, 12:06 PM
[No subject] - by DragonMasterX - 06-07-2006, 01:10 PM
[No subject] - by blueeyedgabulvo0o - 06-07-2006, 01:44 PM
[No subject] - by Herr Mullen - 06-07-2006, 05:16 PM
[No subject] - by Blitz VanCrimson - 06-07-2006, 09:14 PM
[No subject] - by DragonMasterX - 06-07-2006, 10:12 PM
[No subject] - by blueeyedgabulvo0o - 06-08-2006, 08:24 AM
[No subject] - by Wisemon - 06-08-2006, 11:05 AM
[No subject] - by DrunkenMunkee - 06-08-2006, 11:21 AM
[No subject] - by DragonMasterX - 06-08-2006, 01:30 PM
[No subject] - by blueeyedgabulvo0o - 06-08-2006, 01:57 PM
[No subject] - by DrunkenMunkee - 06-08-2006, 03:29 PM
[No subject] - by Shadowknight - 06-08-2006, 03:38 PM
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[No subject] - by Shadowknight - 06-08-2006, 03:42 PM
[No subject] - by blueeyedgabulvo0o - 06-08-2006, 03:50 PM
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[No subject] - by Shadowknight - 06-08-2006, 03:57 PM
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[No subject] - by Gunter VanCrimson - 06-09-2006, 12:17 AM
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[No subject] - by Gunter VanCrimson - 06-09-2006, 01:36 AM
[No subject] - by Seit The Reaper - 06-09-2006, 01:38 AM
[No subject] - by Gunter VanCrimson - 06-09-2006, 01:39 AM
[No subject] - by Shadowknight - 06-09-2006, 01:40 AM
[No subject] - by Gunter VanCrimson - 06-09-2006, 01:41 AM
[No subject] - by Shadowknight - 06-09-2006, 01:55 AM
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[No subject] - by Shadowknight - 06-09-2006, 01:59 AM
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[No subject] - by Shadowknight - 06-09-2006, 02:05 AM
[No subject] - by Gunter VanCrimson - 06-09-2006, 02:06 AM
[No subject] - by Seit The Reaper - 06-09-2006, 02:07 AM
[No subject] - by Shadowknight - 06-09-2006, 02:09 AM
[No subject] - by Gunter VanCrimson - 06-09-2006, 02:10 AM
[No subject] - by blueeyedgabulvo0o - 06-09-2006, 02:11 PM
[No subject] - by DragonMasterX - 06-10-2006, 12:22 AM
[No subject] - by DrunkenMunkee - 06-10-2006, 01:50 AM
[No subject] - by Gunter VanCrimson - 06-10-2006, 02:45 AM
[No subject] - by Shadowknight - 06-10-2006, 04:01 AM
[No subject] - by DrunkenMunkee - 06-10-2006, 04:02 AM
[No subject] - by Gunter VanCrimson - 06-10-2006, 04:18 AM
[No subject] - by Shadowknight - 06-10-2006, 04:20 AM
[No subject] - by Gunter VanCrimson - 06-10-2006, 04:21 AM
[No subject] - by UnknownH - 06-10-2006, 10:30 AM
[No subject] - by DragonMasterX - 06-10-2006, 01:07 PM
[No subject] - by senjuro - 06-10-2006, 02:27 PM
[No subject] - by blueeyedgabulvo0o - 06-10-2006, 02:36 PM
[No subject] - by Gunter VanCrimson - 06-10-2006, 07:52 PM
[No subject] - by blueeyedgabulvo0o - 06-10-2006, 08:29 PM
[No subject] - by Gunter VanCrimson - 06-10-2006, 08:46 PM
[No subject] - by Shadowknight - 06-10-2006, 10:00 PM
[No subject] - by Gunter VanCrimson - 06-10-2006, 11:29 PM
[No subject] - by Wisemon - 06-11-2006, 02:35 AM
[No subject] - by blueeyedgabulvo0o - 06-11-2006, 01:37 PM
[No subject] - by Darkred - 06-11-2006, 04:32 PM
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[No subject] - by blueeyedgabulvo0o - 06-11-2006, 05:10 PM
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[No subject] - by Darkred - 06-11-2006, 05:38 PM
[No subject] - by Shadowknight - 06-11-2006, 09:48 PM
[No subject] - by blueeyedgabulvo0o - 06-11-2006, 10:11 PM
[No subject] - by Shadowknight - 06-12-2006, 08:56 AM
[No subject] - by blueeyedgabulvo0o - 06-12-2006, 10:01 AM
[No subject] - by Wisemon - 06-12-2006, 12:38 PM
[No subject] - by aguy - 06-12-2006, 03:41 PM
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[No subject] - by blueeyedgabulvo0o - 06-13-2006, 05:08 AM
[No subject] - by UnknownH - 06-13-2006, 05:14 AM
[No subject] - by Misty - 06-14-2006, 05:56 AM
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