06-08-2006, 11:05 AM
Your stream of consciousness poetry is impressive. Personally, I can't think fast enough to even use the style, so I don't. I could say that it could use some polish and focus, but that would defeat the point of the style.
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"I looked up and saw you;
I know that you saw me.
We froze but for a moment
In empathy."-Rise Against