03-20-2003, 08:17 PM
I think that plot, characterization, description, and dialouge all help to build up a great story. That, and in my case, if you had lactation/pregnancy, then it turns it into a great story! :D
As for self-insertion, Iagree with Jodan on it. About the only time I think a self-insertion story should be written is when it adds to the plotline. If it doesn't, and then the author himself is the one participating in the lemon scene, then in that case I believe it should be avoided at all cost.
As for self-insertion, Iagree with Jodan on it. About the only time I think a self-insertion story should be written is when it adds to the plotline. If it doesn't, and then the author himself is the one participating in the lemon scene, then in that case I believe it should be avoided at all cost.