03-16-2003, 10:24 PM
Dialouge:
Don't use the script format, for e.g.:
Rika: Renamon, are you alright?
Renamon: Thanks, I'm alright.
Instead, use this:
"Renamon, are you alright?" Asked Rika nervously.
"Thanks, I'm alright." Renamon answered softly.
Description:
The more detail, the better.
Sex:
Don't rush. Don't jump into sex immediately. For e.g.:
Gatomon asked Agumon to fuck her. After a few minutes, they reached orgasm and dozed off.
Thanks.
![](http://www.angelfire.com/alt/daneil/kyub2.jpg)
He squeezed his tentacle
Don't use the script format, for e.g.:
Rika: Renamon, are you alright?
Renamon: Thanks, I'm alright.
Instead, use this:
"Renamon, are you alright?" Asked Rika nervously.
"Thanks, I'm alright." Renamon answered softly.
Description:
The more detail, the better.
Sex:
Don't rush. Don't jump into sex immediately. For e.g.:
Gatomon asked Agumon to fuck her. After a few minutes, they reached orgasm and dozed off.
Thanks.
![](http://www.angelfire.com/alt/daneil/kyub2.jpg)
He squeezed his tentacle