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I was going to post this in Original Fiction, but it's not really fiction. To those who have been posting poems recently, allow me to mention that I am a published poet (see "Closer to the Stars" thread). The reason I don't post more poems here is because technically this counts as publication, and magazines want to have first time publication rights. So, I've managed to find a song/poem not good enough for publishing, but good enough to use as an example of rhythm consistency and extended metaphor.



[color=black]Amusement Park

Thumbs are on the buttons, and I
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"I looked up and saw you;
I know that you saw me.
We froze but for a moment
In empathy."-Rise Against
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This art is out of reach - by Wisemon - 04-01-2006, 10:45 AM
[No subject] - by DarkBlue - 04-01-2006, 07:33 PM
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