Crikey

[Humon]

my "lemons" if you can call them that (truely, I think not...yet), have no sex in it as of yet. I made several finished copies and none of them are acceptable. it's too "made up" (in a critisizing sence... yes; it's sad to critisize myself on my own story, but I look at it as if I never wrote it which makes my stories be "believable". keep working. you don't have to have the porn in it right away, though it has to have it eventually. take some time to get a feel for your characters, set up their personalities, and be creative. sex scenes are tricky. you can't go too fast, but it gets boring if it's too slow. try to do moderate. tease your characters for a couple stories, and let them go. it'll come to you eventually. have fun.

cheers!
~Humon~