03-23-2006, 01:18 AM
I'm usually not one to criticize other people's work but seeing how other people have already brought up the subject I feel I might as well give my thoughts on it. I read the lemon. It didn't look like you put a lot of hard work into it. There was virtually no plot to it, the sex scene was rushed and the sex scene itself was short. Plus it was a crossover. Crossovers are extremely hard to pull off with satisfying results. It really should only be attempted by seasoned veterans of lemon writing and even then its still difficult.
I'm not going to give it a rating in terms of numbers but if I had to choose a correct word for it, I'd select poor. I'm sorry, it's just the way I feel. Wisemon and Unknown H have already said the same thing. You also recently posted that it took yout three years to do about seventeen lemons. Dude, that's really not an accomplishment. I've been writing lemons since 2001 and my count is over two hundred. I'm taking this standpoint as maybe a judge of American Idol.
Simon would probably flat-out insult you but I'm not that kind of person. I consider myself to be more helpful then discouraging. Even though I have not read the other lemons by you, reading the one you already posted gives me a general idea of what to expect. Your lemons need work, lots of work. Try to write at least 10 pages per lemon with 1 page being nothing but sex.
If you're having a hard time or don't even feel like putting that much effort into it I would suggest that you stop right now. Some people are destined lol, to be lemon writers. You can be too although you need to sharpen up your skills. I've done all I can to try and help you out in your situation, the rest is up to you.
I'm not going to give it a rating in terms of numbers but if I had to choose a correct word for it, I'd select poor. I'm sorry, it's just the way I feel. Wisemon and Unknown H have already said the same thing. You also recently posted that it took yout three years to do about seventeen lemons. Dude, that's really not an accomplishment. I've been writing lemons since 2001 and my count is over two hundred. I'm taking this standpoint as maybe a judge of American Idol.
Simon would probably flat-out insult you but I'm not that kind of person. I consider myself to be more helpful then discouraging. Even though I have not read the other lemons by you, reading the one you already posted gives me a general idea of what to expect. Your lemons need work, lots of work. Try to write at least 10 pages per lemon with 1 page being nothing but sex.
If you're having a hard time or don't even feel like putting that much effort into it I would suggest that you stop right now. Some people are destined lol, to be lemon writers. You can be too although you need to sharpen up your skills. I've done all I can to try and help you out in your situation, the rest is up to you.