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I'm afraid that the style couldn't really hold me. I closed it after the Leomon; I'm not really that good with series three, those stories never hold me. The tenses were rather odd. He was having a flashback with future tenses? It mkes no grammatical sense! Also, "I would have my cellular on me"? Usually, that's followed with an "if". No-one talks like that; it's "I'll have my cell."

The business of the the page shocked me when I loaded it up. It really is awfully busy with it's lines, big titles and such.

But what I did love was the indent. Hurrah! I'm always happy to see an indent online. People neglect them, now-a-days. Thanks for brightening my day slightly by assuring me all hope isn't lost for the indent, even if it might be for conventional tenses.
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