01-16-2006, 12:57 PM
So, what do you think about my first lemon? How do you find it, what do you like/don't like, suggestion, what about my writting style, ... Remember that SaberGatomon corrected my lemon.
I will make a series with Foxie and Dom. For now I'm working on the third (6800 words and I am to the 2/3 of the chapter)
BTW, I submitted my second chapter (better than the first) 4-5 days ago and it is not posted.
I will make a series with Foxie and Dom. For now I'm working on the third (6800 words and I am to the 2/3 of the chapter)
BTW, I submitted my second chapter (better than the first) 4-5 days ago and it is not posted.