12-11-2005, 08:42 AM
Well first off I'd suggest you read other people's works that involve male on male sex and see if that can help inspire you. Just don't outright steal their stories. As for what they think I'm not exactly sure what you mean. Like thoughts relating to having sex or just regular thoughts? The way I see it when I write YAOI is that the male characters think just like they're supposed to, pertaining to their character whomever it may be. Also, which couple did you have in mind to write about?