04-03-2012, 08:52 AM
(04-03-2012 08:44 AM)Venin Wrote: Allow me to enlighten you then:
1)I'm a lonely desperate single who's never held a girlfriend. I can't be expected to know everything about intercourse terms.
The more you know. :D
Quote:2)A year of not writing does that to you...
That's alright. I understand what it's like to start writing after a long dry spell.
Quote:3) I don't recall you request me to write such a thing. You said "...all of the players lose their clothes in various and hilarious fashion (of your design, please) until they're all naked." Nothing about sex, although that might be a common sense thing. Again, year of not writing does that to you...
I didn't ask for anything specifically, I just thought it seemed a bit strange after reading it, especially since you specifically mentioned that they hadn't fucked in the ending.
It doesn't ruin the story or anything though.
Quote:I'll regain my writing ability, and I'll try to do a bit better next time. But at least I learned how to be detailed, and I for one think that somewhat makes up for this, wouldn't you agree?
I agree. I really love this series.