What do you hate to see in a lemon?

[Zephyr of Darkness]

Oh yeah, the Mary Sues I forgot too. I think it's natural to write/draw a lemon/pic with you and the guy/girl you like, but who the fuck else wants to see that?! Even more, the chara they use usually gets really OOC. To give you an example: I've been writing a series for myself and in one of my chapters I appear as a tamer, and guess who I pick up? OK, there I write a good explanation why he would want to have sex (not too difficult, really) but you can't imagine a big, bad Demon Lord (the one in my fic is an evil one with evil intentions, and it's not the one in the series) wanting to have a romance with a human (of course, there's nothing like romance there). However, I did see lots of fics where Beelzemon falls in love with a human (ALWAYS, the writer or a chara she created) Ahhhhh..... Not to mention those characters created by the writer/artist that are clearly themselves with another name. This means, more or less: 'I'm fucking your fave chara in front of your eyes and you can't do a thing about it!'
Really, does anyone of you like that kinda things?!

The generic Mr. 12-inch-cock with the stamina of a horse

And you forgot 'that cums a bucket every time of the 15 he does in a night'

There's not many juri/beelzemon fics out there

You forgot 2 words:in English. Remember those &$%%&%& thieves that posted my art without permission? Well, those 2 have written hundreds of lame B/J fics. I would give you the details but I'm sure I'll puke (I'm just gonna tell you that the bratgirl made a Digimon from a B/J fusion :x and that Jeri is Beelzemon's tamer :x :oops: :shock: :( :shock: :o :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll: )