08-30-2010, 05:37 PM
(08-30-2010 04:23 PM)riku910 Wrote: and im sorry about what i said... i was furios because this was my best story work yet, and you practiclly insultid it. i hope you understand. sorry '.-_-.
Watch what you say. I'm the guy you answer to when it comes to writing on this website.
What you've written so far is an absolute mess. There is no substance or structure in it. We have no idea who this Pokeshipper person is, either. If you need reference (and you DESPERATELY do!), check the Lemons in the Author's Den by DragonMasterX and I.
Due to the random nature of everything, I suggest to the S. Mods that this gets transfered to the Spam forum.
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