08-27-2010, 03:04 PM
Not bad. I didn't see any glaring flaws about it, and I am curious what happens later (if Linvar finally submits or if Kaze goes a little easier on her).
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The Fall of a Heroine. (Linvar x Kaze) - by DragonMasterX - 08-25-2010, 09:42 AM
RE: The Fall of a Heroine. (Linvar x Kaze) - by Crimson Fox - 08-27-2010, 03:04 PM
RE: The Fall of a Heroine. (Linvar x Kaze) - by DragonMasterX - 08-27-2010, 04:34 PM
RE: The Fall of a Heroine. (Linvar x Kaze) - by Crimson Fox - 08-28-2010, 03:50 AM
RE: The Fall of a Heroine. (Linvar x Kaze) - by tigerlily - 08-31-2010, 08:23 AM
RE: The Fall of a Heroine. (Linvar x Kaze) - by DragonMasterX - 08-31-2010, 09:41 AM
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