07-04-2010, 03:46 AM
Nice, this story was a lot of fun and I really love Renamon/Flamedramon pairings.
I didn't really notice any big problems, and there were only a few misspellings that I noticed. Nice work, Mar. I hope you continue this. I <3 Renamon cowgirls. XD
I didn't really notice any big problems, and there were only a few misspellings that I noticed. Nice work, Mar. I hope you continue this. I <3 Renamon cowgirls. XD
