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Group Leader. (Agumon x Gaomon x Falcomon)
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(06-15-2010 01:06 PM)Crimson Fox Wrote: Crimson: Why do you always eat me?! *flips open Mar's head like a toy and jumps out before putting it back on normally* Eat Ada, she probably tastes like ice cream after all those treats. :P

And okay, I understand now that you wanted to mention his endurance. "After the third minute" still sounds awkward though. XP I don't know, you could have used "Eventually" or "Several minutes later".

*nibbles on Crimson Fox cause I like Burmecians* <.< Hope I'm not interrupting lmao.
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RE: Group Leader. (Agumon x Gaomon x Falcomon) - by DatRyebread - 06-16-2010, 10:05 AM