06-15-2010, 01:06 PM
Crimson: Why do you always eat me?! *flips open Mar's head like a toy and jumps out before putting it back on normally* Eat Ada, she probably tastes like ice cream after all those treats. :P
And okay, I understand now that you wanted to mention his endurance. "After the third minute" still sounds awkward though. XP I don't know, you could have used "Eventually" or "Several minutes later".
And okay, I understand now that you wanted to mention his endurance. "After the third minute" still sounds awkward though. XP I don't know, you could have used "Eventually" or "Several minutes later".
