06-14-2010, 08:21 AM
For someone who only saw a few episodes of Data Squad you sure know how to nail the characters. Gaomon and Agumon I felt were absolutely spot-on. Falcomon is probably a bit OOC but seeing one of the requests/'challenges' was fitting in a dom... I sooooo don't mind. Hell, keep him like that. ;) Male doms are exciting, especially when it comes to dominating submissive little guys like Gao and breaking them (not physically of course but you know what I mean xD)
I thought the story overall was awesome and you definitely made me a fan of your work. Love the tidbit at the end where Gaomon submits to his new private role, god forbid I can already visualize an aftermath scene which I won't go into details. xD At least unless I request again from you which probably wouldn't be fair to the others currently waiting or wanting to request a story from ya.
See you around bud, thanks again for writing this. Easily up there as one of my favorite Digimon Lemons.
I thought the story overall was awesome and you definitely made me a fan of your work. Love the tidbit at the end where Gaomon submits to his new private role, god forbid I can already visualize an aftermath scene which I won't go into details. xD At least unless I request again from you which probably wouldn't be fair to the others currently waiting or wanting to request a story from ya.
See you around bud, thanks again for writing this. Easily up there as one of my favorite Digimon Lemons.
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