12-18-2004, 04:12 PM
Quote:hey this is like that one offspring song Original PranksterThanks, that was my goal, and I don't think I made it all that subtle. It's one of my favorite songs. As far as meaning goes, this poem isn't so great, but I'm just really proud of my rhyming ability on this one.
I got that one then I looked it up to check good job copying the rythem
"I looked up and saw you;
I know that you saw me.
We froze but for a moment
In empathy."-Rise Against