12-17-2004, 11:57 PM
Hey i read the full story and it was great. I really liked how you made some songs for the end of it. and as for your next one being a non-lemon it wouldn't matter. this lemons greatness was in its plot although i hardly have the experiance to rate lemons just plots in them. if you dont mind Wise i'd like to write my own song that goes with the lemon and it has alot of my life in it as well. and once again good job i read it about 5 times a week. yes i know i need some kind of life. and if ya live in Israel then i think this his violent writing is realistic, that or the southside of LA. so to quote hhvorausgesagt: "Realistic? You mean to say you ACTUALLY see a lot of people get thier heads blown off, or get impaled, or get decapitated, or any other form of gruesome death that you can think up of? IN REAL LIFE?!" i do believe one factor is location. afterall the gas station i was at a few days ago was robbed. and i dont particually want to go into detaills about how the clerks brain ended up on my shirt.