03-28-2010, 09:02 PM
Its a good story, dispite having some irregularities in your grammar and punctuation, it's a very well written and thought out story.
Reminds me of those old storys on radio where the young maiden would be submissive to her darling gruff working man, although it has a bit of a modern twist on it. I like that.
Reminds me of those old storys on radio where the young maiden would be submissive to her darling gruff working man, although it has a bit of a modern twist on it. I like that.
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