01-29-2010, 12:54 AM
*facepalm* i just realized this is under original fiction and not reveiw......*shrug* if you want some advice, try wisemon, he's good at this stuff...not sure what he does, but he does have some good stories.
er...i'm sure there are other's too that can reveiw better than me. *thats for sure*
in all though, good story, looking forward to the rest when it is posted.
er...i'm sure there are other's too that can reveiw better than me. *thats for sure*
in all though, good story, looking forward to the rest when it is posted.
Many times lost, many times found again.
