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Sinful Shadows (Rape fic, Izumi/Duskmon)
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Wow. Never thought the plot would actually be insulted. Heh...whatever. Constructive criticism is a good thing. At least I got complimented on my writing ability. Rock on. 8)

By the way, I always try to improve a little every time I write a story...so it'd be great if someone could point out exactly what I need to improve upon and why. I get more from criticism than praise. ^^
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[No subject] - by UnknownH - 10-20-2004, 02:53 PM
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