Sinful Shadows (Rape fic, Izumi/Duskmon)

[Wisemon]

Well, I absolutely despise the plot with every fiber of my existence, but I think that's what you were going for, a strong reaction. As far as your writing goes, you're pretty fucking talented. You managed to have a lot of detail, but you still kept it as fairly interesting detail, which isn't easy to do. You used a lot of nice language too, some really good word choice. If you can bring your talent into a more enjoyable story, you might have something. You know, I seem to recall certain people picking on me for hinting that Kouichi would rape Izumi (for the record, I meant after death), but you actually went through with it.

She had always imagined what her first time would be like. After an amazing wedding ceremony she would be swept off of her feet for a night of passionate lovemaking, surrounded by candles and soft music.

Then stay tuned to the next chapter in my series.