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12-16-2009, 08:44 AM
Seems a little cliche, to have a person of some importance and uniqueness as the main antagonist...also, whats the dilemma/plot of the story? What does Mr Willis do that will make me, the reader, want to read on?
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check out my idea - by grandphoenix1 - 12-15-2009, 10:13 AM
RE: check out my idea - by Guilmon and a shotgun - 12-16-2009, 08:44 AM
RE: check out my idea - by grandphoenix1 - 12-16-2009, 10:16 AM
RE: check out my idea - by Guilmon and a shotgun - 12-17-2009, 09:21 AM
RE: check out my idea - by grandphoenix1 - 12-17-2009, 10:14 AM
RE: check out my idea - by Yumi - 12-18-2009, 11:35 PM