New Post =Part 4! But i seriously need some name suggestions here I cant think of one

[Renafan]

Not bad, not bad at all...your humor is great, I must say especially in the opening bit where he gets "eaten" by his computer. Though the sex scene feels rushed, I like the little relationship you have between the Hawkmon/Adam/Flamedramon you have going. Seems you're a fan of 02 I take it? Try to develop your sex scene a little bit more than a paragraph...ie, read some other lemons for inspiration and give it a go.