09-26-2004, 03:35 PM
Quote:This does seem to be different from your usual style of writing, wisemon.Well, there are several personal touches in this story. I talk about those in the author's notes, which are almost as long as the actual story. As far as a change in style, this is different, but it does have some similarities to "Generic Blues", which had the most beautiful ending of any of my stories. I intend to write something with a much more depressing and realistic ending eventually, either as a single, or a new series.
For instance, much of the quotes in the second part of the story seem different from such in the first one and compared to others you have written; much of the story seems to represent your changing current lifestyle.
"I looked up and saw you;
I know that you saw me.
We froze but for a moment
In empathy."-Rise Against