09-13-2004, 09:38 AM
I just submitted the contest winner, You Don't Love Me Anymore, the last new lemon you'll see from me for a while. It's heavily influenced by Stabbing Westward. If anyone here knows about Stabbing Westward, comments about the band would be cool (I think they were very underrated). More importantly, comments about the lemon would be really great. Please, READ AND REVIEW (except UnknownH, who's already read it in testing, thanks again). Here's the preview:
Daisuke sat in his room and stared at his D-Terminal screen, waiting for Hikari
Daisuke sat in his room and stared at his D-Terminal screen, waiting for Hikari
"I looked up and saw you;
I know that you saw me.
We froze but for a moment
In empathy."-Rise Against