06-22-2009, 09:04 AM
It seemed a little messy at the beginning, but I got hooked in around the third or fourth page *Reading from the Doc. version*. I think there were a few spelling errors here and there, but nothing so serious that it killed the mood.
I give this a personal rating of 8/10. -1 point because of the beginning, but -1 point because it's still not my kind of Lemon. Recommendation rating of 9/10
I give this a personal rating of 8/10. -1 point because of the beginning, but -1 point because it's still not my kind of Lemon. Recommendation rating of 9/10
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No super-villain can resist the temptation of a Walking Eye.
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