05-06-2009, 12:04 AM
The question didn't seem to be particularly about lemons, so I was about to comment about the whole concept of taste, but let me tell you they are sour.
*Cricket chirping*
DMX: DAMN YOU TO HELL! Thought I had gotten rid of you! *Cocks shotgun and blows cricket up*
So anyway, when you read a lemon, you usually expect a sex scene either at the start, middle or end of the story. My preference is to wait until the climax of both the story and the scene, so to speak. A good plot which concentrates on the story keeps a reader clinging onto each word, and knowing there will be sex, some of them will be craving it more and more the longer the story is. Suspense kills, but it also attracts people, like anything unknown or at least, partially unknown.
Leave them hanging, and they'll kill you, but if you survive, and you write again, they'll read it too! <- Fact.
My suggestion is to write a healthily long (8min-20max, in Microsoft Word pages) short-story which has enough time to explain and characterize every protagonist and at the same time make the plot not only crystal-clear to the reader, but also entertaining. Season with suspense and top it with Sex, and you got a Good Lemon.
*Cricket chirping*
DMX: DAMN YOU TO HELL! Thought I had gotten rid of you! *Cocks shotgun and blows cricket up*
So anyway, when you read a lemon, you usually expect a sex scene either at the start, middle or end of the story. My preference is to wait until the climax of both the story and the scene, so to speak. A good plot which concentrates on the story keeps a reader clinging onto each word, and knowing there will be sex, some of them will be craving it more and more the longer the story is. Suspense kills, but it also attracts people, like anything unknown or at least, partially unknown.
Leave them hanging, and they'll kill you, but if you survive, and you write again, they'll read it too! <- Fact.
My suggestion is to write a healthily long (8min-20max, in Microsoft Word pages) short-story which has enough time to explain and characterize every protagonist and at the same time make the plot not only crystal-clear to the reader, but also entertaining. Season with suspense and top it with Sex, and you got a Good Lemon.
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