04-22-2009, 01:31 AM
The Messages may of been set out wrong but all of it even the "-Sora" at the end is included in the messages they read, its how the emails semmed to be set out in the show so I sort of went on that.
The reason I had Tia, Matt, Davis and Ken jump at the prospect of saving Sora and Kari is that, I know i should give them more credit and I may work more on it so it takes a bit, but I wanted them out of the way for the time being, having Lilithmon take down Omnimon and Imperiadramon in the first chapter seemed in my mind to be a bit over powered on her half, yes she's a mega but I wanted her Character to rely more on her knowledge and cunning then raw stregnth, like Deamon or Belphemon. I know Tia and Matt had become more confident and more level headed but it seemed more in Davis's nature to rush into thing especially when Kari was concerned, like in Episode 13 Kari wasn't in the digita world yet still insisted that they go look for her, ignoring TK protests that she wasn't there.
TK has a part to play in the coming future which I've mapped out but is hard getting down, dont worry :P. I kept him out of it for a reason other than that Davis and Ken are stronger, also it doesn't seem Davis would have it in his bussiness to inform the guy he's competing with for Kari, even if TK being with him ould highten the chances of saving Kari.
All of the Digidestined both mine and Original will play there part and not be out matched but the stage is still being set, so to speak.
The first chapters will revolve around Lilithmon and her teaking control and Some issues with the original digidestined, I know that they were designed to work as a team thats why I also left Izzy back at the house it was leading to something even if everything is a bit poorly spread out.
Problem is I put this off to long i'm putting the story together in my head but i'm already a few chapter ahead so its the filling in the start that taking the most time.
A worded Trailer for Chapter 2
Chapter 2 is in motion, Lilithmon's plans are increasing at an astonishing rate with her targets firmly set. The British and Japanese Digidestined are preparing an assualt on Lilithmon's Base as she prepares herown assualt that will throw the digital world into chaos. Coming Soon Chapter 2 of the pandora series - Rebeling Royalty (<--- May change)
Well I'm going to finish Chap 2 then update Chap 1, so any other questions or any stuff I need to work on before I get started?
The reason I had Tia, Matt, Davis and Ken jump at the prospect of saving Sora and Kari is that, I know i should give them more credit and I may work more on it so it takes a bit, but I wanted them out of the way for the time being, having Lilithmon take down Omnimon and Imperiadramon in the first chapter seemed in my mind to be a bit over powered on her half, yes she's a mega but I wanted her Character to rely more on her knowledge and cunning then raw stregnth, like Deamon or Belphemon. I know Tia and Matt had become more confident and more level headed but it seemed more in Davis's nature to rush into thing especially when Kari was concerned, like in Episode 13 Kari wasn't in the digita world yet still insisted that they go look for her, ignoring TK protests that she wasn't there.
TK has a part to play in the coming future which I've mapped out but is hard getting down, dont worry :P. I kept him out of it for a reason other than that Davis and Ken are stronger, also it doesn't seem Davis would have it in his bussiness to inform the guy he's competing with for Kari, even if TK being with him ould highten the chances of saving Kari.
All of the Digidestined both mine and Original will play there part and not be out matched but the stage is still being set, so to speak.
The first chapters will revolve around Lilithmon and her teaking control and Some issues with the original digidestined, I know that they were designed to work as a team thats why I also left Izzy back at the house it was leading to something even if everything is a bit poorly spread out.
Problem is I put this off to long i'm putting the story together in my head but i'm already a few chapter ahead so its the filling in the start that taking the most time.
A worded Trailer for Chapter 2
Chapter 2 is in motion, Lilithmon's plans are increasing at an astonishing rate with her targets firmly set. The British and Japanese Digidestined are preparing an assualt on Lilithmon's Base as she prepares herown assualt that will throw the digital world into chaos. Coming Soon Chapter 2 of the pandora series - Rebeling Royalty (<--- May change)
Well I'm going to finish Chap 2 then update Chap 1, so any other questions or any stuff I need to work on before I get started?
"How did Mary Die?"
"A TIRE, HIT HER IN THE FACE!"
"A TIRE, HIT HER IN THE FACE!"
