07-23-2004, 01:16 AM
Actually, since your story here is a Takari, comments concerning Takari fics aren't exactly off-topic. Also, considering that the whole thing went from Wisemon saying he thought it was too sweet (which I have to agree on, it's so tooth-decayingly sweet that it makes me want to hate all the forces of 'order' or 'light' or 'good' or whatever you call it and make money off of killing them... starting with Takeru, followed by Hikari, and then going on to Magical Girls) to Wisemon saying he has written a Takari lemon which is not so sweet (and looks at it SERIOUSLY, yey!).
LP, you have gotten ONE review, and that's from someone who shares your waffy feelings about Takari. Wisemon said he couldn't give a fair review of it, which... is that really a review? Then your waffy "friend" decided to bump the topic, as if asking for more to be posted. So more was posted (see the above paragraph).
I don't hate Takari, but I do hate it when things get too waffy, especially in a lemon. Maybe I'm just the type that believes in art imitating life, but if I ever meet anyone who is so blatantly sugary as you made out the characters in this story, I would seriously consider suicide. People are NOT this sweet in real life, even the ones who are "lovey-dovey" aren't THIS sweet /all/ of the time. That's why I hate most depictions of certain pairings, most particularly Takari.
As the mod for this forum, and since the topic has not left the Takari/PataGato field, I don't think we're dealing with anything off topic in this thread. I need something sithout sugar now...
LP, you have gotten ONE review, and that's from someone who shares your waffy feelings about Takari. Wisemon said he couldn't give a fair review of it, which... is that really a review? Then your waffy "friend" decided to bump the topic, as if asking for more to be posted. So more was posted (see the above paragraph).
I don't hate Takari, but I do hate it when things get too waffy, especially in a lemon. Maybe I'm just the type that believes in art imitating life, but if I ever meet anyone who is so blatantly sugary as you made out the characters in this story, I would seriously consider suicide. People are NOT this sweet in real life, even the ones who are "lovey-dovey" aren't THIS sweet /all/ of the time. That's why I hate most depictions of certain pairings, most particularly Takari.
As the mod for this forum, and since the topic has not left the Takari/PataGato field, I don't think we're dealing with anything off topic in this thread. I need something sithout sugar now...