07-22-2004, 11:07 AM
Hot, hot, hot... except a few problems. The biggest is Jun's hair, which looks messed up. I mean messed up like I drew it, and that, to me, is bad. Her hair doesn't get any better throughout the pictures... I think the problem is that it's too spiky... you drew too many sections of her hair, some of which seem to be too long.
Also... her beasts... the one we see in the first pic seems to be very far to the side without much distortion. In the second pic, V-chan's eyes look too wide on his face, and his claws shoudld be wider on his feet than that.
The third pic seems the one I'll have to be toughest on... First, Jun's hair seems to override where her head should be (look closely, and some of the spikes are in along what ought to be the curve of her head). Second, V-chan seems too tall... namely his head seems to be too high up from the rest of his body. Now I've heard pretty good things about dragon cock (the most appealing is that it's supposedly 2/5 of the body length!), but the girth of Veemon is disproportionate to his body, even for a dragon! Not that I expect his lovers would complain too much about it...
I'm just wondering if you could maybe do Jun with Flamedramon sometime. Not to be pushy, work takes time, good work doubly so. Keep it up, you're improving a lot.
Also... her beasts... the one we see in the first pic seems to be very far to the side without much distortion. In the second pic, V-chan's eyes look too wide on his face, and his claws shoudld be wider on his feet than that.
The third pic seems the one I'll have to be toughest on... First, Jun's hair seems to override where her head should be (look closely, and some of the spikes are in along what ought to be the curve of her head). Second, V-chan seems too tall... namely his head seems to be too high up from the rest of his body. Now I've heard pretty good things about dragon cock (the most appealing is that it's supposedly 2/5 of the body length!), but the girth of Veemon is disproportionate to his body, even for a dragon! Not that I expect his lovers would complain too much about it...
I'm just wondering if you could maybe do Jun with Flamedramon sometime. Not to be pushy, work takes time, good work doubly so. Keep it up, you're improving a lot.