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Feedback on my lemon?
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06-19-2004, 02:14 PM
It was good, it was really good. But I agree with TheReclaimer that there could've been a motive to her masterbation. Also the consistancy with her name changed from Renara to Rena towards the middle (Not that it really bothers most people but I'm just sayin'). But other wise no complaints.
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Feedback on my lemon? - by renamonfan - 06-17-2004, 10:46 PM
[No subject] - by The Reclaimer - 06-18-2004, 03:44 AM
[No subject] - by Darkmole - 06-19-2004, 02:14 PM
[No subject] - by renamonfan - 06-20-2004, 09:02 AM
[No subject] - by The Reclaimer - 06-20-2004, 03:20 PM
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